MS. Found in a Bottle

MS. found in a bottle is a really good story. I thought it was a cool story to write because it has a unique twist to it. The ship that the narrator is on was sunken by a whirlpool, a highly unlikely but very possible affliction at sea. After the ship sinks the only people who survive is the narrator and another man. The narrator decides to write a message in a bottle in hopes it will help him be rescued. However, the second boat that arrives also sinks, leaving both ships stranded with basically no hope of rescue.